Citing

Today in English class i showed my work to fellow classmates and i received feedback on my letter to mayor  Bill de Blasio, i would like to thank them as it will help me write a better paper next time. They told me that  i have a lot of run on sentences and i should work on my quotations, and i should give more reasoning as to why i agree/disagree if New York is ready/not ready for global warming. To improve my essay even more, i would like my professor to help me with my introduction, as that's where i have the most trouble in essays.